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June 9th, 2008

Eyes page 1

3 page story.

This story is a bit of an experiment. I wanted to try and convey abstract Ideas with out using word balloons and see how successful words with in the image could be at conveying those ideas.

3 Responses to “Eyes page 1”

  1. Timb Says:

    Dude, do you mean ‘word balloons’ in the second sentence?

    This idea intrigues me. I almost wonder if more judicious word usage would have stronger impact. i..e write shitloads of descriptive words and then really nail it down to the key 5 or 6 that will form a sentence in the reader’s mind and use them. Just a thought anyway. And the art is nice!

  2. draw Says:

    Oops you’re right, fixed it. Thanks
    Richard has talked about this idea of sifting through a lot of words and distilling them to form Haiku.
    I think you’re right it would have a stronger impact. Generally there is no fluff in comics text anyway.

  3. Timb Says:

    I reckon save the haiku for a separate comic. That’s a challenge in itself 🙂

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